How to say this statement-of-purpose essay has no consistency in how the points are laid out and gives a distracted impression. in Japanese

1)このこの(kono) (n) this志望志望(shibou) (n,vs) wish/desire/ambition理由書no dictionary result, likely a conjigated verbno dictionary result, likely a conjigated verbは(ha) (int) indicating a subject/yes/indeed/well/ha!/what?/huh?/sigh、(、) Japanese comma論旨論旨(ronshi) (n) point of an argument/drift of an argumentの(no) (prt) indicates possessive/nominalizes verbs and adjectives/substitutes for "ga" in subordinate phrases/indicates a confident conclusion/ indicates emotional emphasis/indicates question展開展開(tenkai) (n,vs) development/evolution/progressing/unfolding/expansion/spreading out/extending/deployment/building upに(ni) (prt) indicates such things as location of person or thing, location of short-term action, etc.一貫性一貫性(ikkansei) (n) consistencyが(ga) (prt) indicates sentence subject/indicates possessive/but/however/still/and無くno dictionary result, likely a conjigated verbno dictionary result, likely a conjigated verb、(、) Japanese comma散漫散漫(sanman) (adj-na,n) vague/desultory/distracted/loose/half-hearted/diffuseな(na) (prt) connects adj to noun/indicates emotion or emphasis/command/prohibition印象印象(inshou) (n,vs) impressionですです(desu) (aux) be/is/are。(。) Japanese period "."    
kono shibou riyuusho ha 、 ronshi no tenkai ni ikkansei ga naku 、 sanman na inshou desu 。
Grammer form丁寧語 (Polite form)Polite form (teineigo)
convays a sense of politeness, used when speaking to strangers, people older than you, higher social status ect.
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