How to say his thesis doesn't make sense. to begin with, its theme is obscure. in Japanese
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彼の彼の(kano) (adj-pn) that論文論文(ronbun) (n) thesis/essay/treatise/paper/articleはは(ha) (int) indicating a subject/yes/indeed/well/ha!/what?/huh?/sigh意味不明意味不明(imifumei) (n,adj-na,adj-no) of uncertain meaning/ambiguous/cryptic。。(。) Japanese period "."第一第一(daiichi) (adv,n) first/foremost/number one、、(、) Japanese comma主題主題(shudai) (n) subject/theme/motifがが(ga) (prt) indicates sentence subject/indicates possessive/but/however/still/and曖昧曖昧(aimai) (adj-na,n) vague/ambiguous/unclear/ fuzzyだだ(da) (aux) be/is/indicates past or completed action/indicates light imperative。。(。) Japanese period "."
